In this awesome pattern of things you actually get a B+ with regard to effort and hard work. Exactly where you confused us ended up being on your details. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more true here. Having said that, permit me tell you what did work. The text is actually quite engaging and this is most likely why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really sure of how you appear to connect the points which in turn make the final result. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point but wish in the future you connect the dots better.