Throughout the awesome scheme of things you get an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost us was in all the details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more accurate in this article. Having said that, let me inform you just what did give good results. The article (parts of it) can be incredibly engaging which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can notice the jumps in logic you come up with, I am not really certain of how you seem to unite the points which in turn produce your conclusion. For the moment I shall yield to your issue but hope in the future you link the dots much better.