In this excellent pattern of things you actually receive a B+ with regard to hard work. Exactly where you actually lost us was first on the particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you what exactly did give good results. Your writing is definitely pretty convincing which is probably the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can notice a leaps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily certain of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas which in turn produce your final result. For the moment I shall subscribe to your position but hope in the future you actually link your dots better.