Throughout this grand pattern of things you receive a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost me ended up being in all the particulars. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you what did work. The writing is actually really persuasive and that is probably why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, although I can notice the leaps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily confident of just how you appear to connect the ideas which inturn make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your position but trust in the future you link your dots much better.