In the grand scheme of things you actually receive an A just for effort and hard work. Where you lost me personally ended up being in the particulars. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, allow me inform you precisely what did give good results. Your text can be very convincing and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can easily notice a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of exactly how you appear to connect the ideas which help to make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue however wish in the future you link the facts much better.