Throughout this grand design of things you receive a B- just for effort and hard work. Where you actually confused us was first on the facts. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more correct in this article. Having said that, permit me tell you what exactly did give good results. The article (parts of it) is really persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really confident of just how you appear to unite your details which help to make the actual conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your position however trust in the future you actually link your dots better.